In many countries, people like to eat a wide variety of food that are grown in other areas.
As a result, they eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the
advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the past decades, daily diet has become more diversified than before with a wider range of
food imported from other regions. Many people nowadays prefer food transported from other areas
to locally produced food. While this tendency is gaining currency and has several benefits, I am the
opinion that its drawbacks are more considerable for the following reasons.
On the one hand, it is noteworthy that there are some advantages of consuming imported food. Firstly, this trend can
increase the varieties of food, thereby guaranteeing the sufficient intake of nutrition. For instance,
those who live in cold areas where extreme weather poses various difficulties to farming activities can
consume fruits that are grown in tropical area, striking a balance between the consumption of meat and
fiber. Secondly, this development could encourage bilateral trading activities between different
regions. For example, a country or region can focus on the manufacturing industrial products and
exchange them with others, which is consistent with the global trend of specialization.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the above mentioned benefits, I would argue that it will be a
grievous mistake to disregard its pitfalls. One of its potential harms is that to prolong fruit longevity,
especially that of perishable agricultural products, preservatives are commonly used in food processing,
which poses a risk to consumer’s health, as these additives may contain some detrimental
substances. In addition, another problem that should be taken into account is that excessive
consumption of exotic fruits and ignoring the possibility of developing industrialized farming may disable
a country from achieving food security or self-sufficiency. A telling example is Norway, statistics have
shown that increasing preference to imported food has made this country heavily dependent on food
supply from neighboring countries.
In conclusion, although there are some undeniable advantages of eating imported food, it is
a grave mistake to overlook intangible problems as discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79487179487 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1104741294 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7063572636 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32659530064 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112730042921 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928152665065 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076158924715 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824090851375 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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