In many countries, plastic bags are the main source of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution and so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniable that plastic bags are very harmful to the environment. Many countries major concern is plastic bags, which are very useful in shopping, it has many detrimental effects on water, air and land, so they should be banned. I agree with this statement and I will discuss all the related points in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are many significant effects people face today to use of plastic bags in their daily routine. The most remarkable reason is water pollution, people throw plastic bags in the river or pond, these bags contaminated water and that water is used by people for a different purpose. In the end, they face some ailments caused by polluted water. Moreover, land pollution is the biggest concern for today's society. These plastic bags are not recycled easily because their micron like plastic bags is made from different harmful chemicals, which are hazardous for people.
In the same vein, many countries already banned on use of plastic bags, for instance, the Indian government enforce the law for the plastic ban. Yet, the majority of people obey these rules and this practice is successfully run in India, because of this law water and land pollution are alleviated day by day, it is a great way to overcome pollution and get a better environment for the upcoming generation. In addition, instead of using plastic bags, people should commence using paper bags, which is easily recycled and not excessively harmful to the environment. Last but far from least, countries authorities should ban plastic as soon as possible, it is the only way to prevent the environment.
Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and by my personal experience as well, I would like to state in conclusion that people should understand the importance and value of the environment, by their self they curb to use detrimental items, which are inappropriate for our atmosphere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...importance and value of the environment, by their self they curb to use detriment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0031152648 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71543535254 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517133956386 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7841134156 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289957912709 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11371628989 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733813795834 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18007967792 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819487876649 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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