In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Despite the fact that it is a universal practice to imprison criminals, many people opine that quality education is the most efficient way of deterring people from reoffence. I think that education is one of the possible approaches, but other measures are equally important.
One the one hand, education can be an efficient instrument of limiting reoffence, owing to having capacity of changing outlook in criminals by instilling new mindset and conceptions. As knowledge enables them to understand the nature of crime and possible consequences, in many cases, inmates or criminals do not reoffend. Also, education creates opportunity for people to have a better living, thereby, helps them not to involve in a crime. Admittedly, it is true that education has enormous potential to motivate people, however, its effectiveness is being questioned as an increasing number of educated people are engaging in criminal activities, and in the USA alone, this number is more than 20% of total criminals.
On the other hand, prison can be considered as safer and stable institution of criminal reforms. This is mainly because the environment inside the jail is not friendly, rather full of hardships and challenges, and in many cases, violence is a common scenario. Having endured such painful experience, many offenders get their life-long lessons, and do not think of breaking or coming in contact with the law again, thus, limiting the number of reoffenders.
All in all, in my opinion, the best approach is to combine all these solutions to address the issue. What I think is that education can be a great option, but not the last answer. So, we should think of how we can integrate all of these options to counteract reoffence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, thus, i think, in many cases, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12014134276 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9084771095 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9352304009 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245725834576 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080205793104 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570906869825 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136457499117 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582452427242 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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