In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the corporate world, The hike of employees is dependent on their skills and experiences that aids to someone can earn considerably high salaries than their peers. Some people argue that earning of huge salaries by a few people is sound for the country while others argue that the government should limit the salaries. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and express my opinion.
To commence with, Earning high salaries by a small number of people will help to maintain the economy of the country. If people started getting pocket-full of salaries, then they will tend to spend that money for their pleasures and to lead a luxurious life. Eventually, The demand for the goods will rise, and then companies will increase the prices of goods provided that the money circulation will happen in the country. To exemplify this, As per the recent survey, the economy of a country is directly dependent on how money is rotating from hands to hands in that country. Even though high-paid jobs in the country will help to boost up the economy of that country, there are few drawbacks regarding that.
On the other side of the coin, Some people contend that governments should confine salaries up to certain levels to maintain equality among citizens in the country. The gap between rich and poor people will increase while paying a few people with huge salaries. Employees with high-paying jobs are able to buy costly and quality products in the market but others are not able to afford that much. For example, Nowadays, Only rich and highly salaried people are affordable to get immediate treatment if they infected with the Covid due to a surge in the number of Corona cases. Differences in society will cause feelings of distress among a group of people by others, which is not appreciable for the development of the country.
In a nutshell, Although there are certain drawbacks due to huge salaries giving to a certain amount of people, those all are negligible when compared to its advantages. Instead of restricting the salaries to a certain level by governments, they can use the taxes collected by the high salaried employees to reduce the burden on low economy people by giving subsidies on health care and other sectors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...commence with, Earning high salaries by a small number of people will help to maintain the econom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8955613577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54204331156 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488250652742 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0440237862 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354856014648 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121868541861 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824240513657 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223936473352 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048843095151 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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