In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that salaries above a certain level should not be allowed with high earners, but others believe that people are free to earn as much as they want, and they think this is a good development. In my opinion, I believe that not allowing paying salaries for people high-paid people is completely necessary for countries and I agree with the second viewpoint.
On the one hand, the reasons why others think that people earn high salaries is essential for national development. Firstly, if people have high salaries, they will help their country a lot because they can buy modern machines or technologies from USA or England where are advanced technologies or machines. In this way, their country will develop significantly thanks to those modern technologies and machines by using them to build many buildings or explore minerals. Secondly, earning a high salary also contributes to education by building schools for children to educate them, so when these children are well educated, they will employ in high-paying jobs and earn a high salary to help the country develop.
On the other hand, I believe that society will be affected huge economic if the maximum salary is not set by the government. To begin with, there are some people who feel unfair when they see others earn a higher salary than them even though working in the same company. Therefore, it is necessary to limit the salaries. So everyone can earn equal salaries in their job profile. Moreover, if their salaries are paid equally, the standard of living can be raised. Furthermore, this will reduce poverty rates by allowing earning a equal salaries, so poor people's life will be better thanks to equal salaries.
In conclusion, although earning high salaries can help their country will be better, but it seems to me that government should put a limited salary to make the economy and people's life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: salary
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95583596215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59365470932 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2526204899 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399510659964 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150611262851 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101995744911 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275853280111 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104411001161 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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