In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects. Discuss the effect of this.
Sports and exercises are quite important for improving health and leading a healthier life. However, they have been replaced by school subject in many countries. In this essay, I will discuss about effect of this.
Sports and exercises have many benefits for the children in the school chair. First of all, they help to develop character and personality because when the student will know competition, work in groups and be able to avoid diseases. For example: playing football practice many children know where they need to stand to help their team win. Nowadays, modern technology is developing with internet appealing to many kids. That is a reason why they have forgotten exercise which it leads to overweight or obese. So, many school should have physical education to prevent these long-term negative effect about mentally and physically in every child.
Nevertheless, many people think they need to spend more time and energy to academic subjects which it brings positive students in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24539877301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52006140271 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.523991145 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265198571693 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103532151388 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719740102817 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184313321151 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112078447014 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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