TOPIC 1: In the past, most people lived in small villages, where everyone knew every else. Nowadays, most people lives in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What are the advantages and disadvantage.
The society is developing day by day, leading to a change to people's live. Many people appeared in small rural places and they all known their neighbors. Now, most people chosen their life on the big cities where they did not know much about people near their homes. In this essay, I will writing advantage and disadvantage about live small villages and big cities.
There are many positive when human have their life in small rural place and large cities. Firstly, it brings advantage that the people will easily find friends to play because they are more friendly and more sociable in countryside.Besides, the farmer have a simple life that is why they are not important roles in society. Secondly, the life will be more comfortable when the choice is the small house in the countryside. Birds singing, fresh air and tranquility will help making life healthier and less stressful. Finally, humans will catch up with the modernity of technology and lifestyle. For example: these marketing of technology company usually chose big cities to advertisement and description of the first product.
On the other hand, living in countryside or big cities also brings many disadvantages. All of first, when the people made more friends that means their privacy will be affected. Those are unpleasant feelings that arise when someone is always sarcastic or gossiping about your own. Next, education system is that children in rural place will be more restrictive than the city kids. Because, modern facilities and equipment for learning are often a priority for city students. Finally, the large cities create many jobs that is why many people remove their house in small village. For example: the company will chosen place to building their infrastructure which the cities takes many advantages of shipping or trading.
In conclusion, they both bring benefits and disadvantages in two areas. The human will find more friend and have life comfortable in countryside, however, they do not have modern technology and do not enough jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...description of the first product. On the other hand, living in countryside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15662650602 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68872333978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8143876132 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239321524841 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776474850499 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829982229952 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160899247198 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132574086121 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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