In many countries television shows many foreign-made programmes. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many countries enjoy watching international television programmes. In my opinion, this has had a positive effect on people and cultures, for the following reasons.
The first area it effects is education. Surprisingly, international TV shows somewhat help many people to gain more knowledges, children tend to learn some basic academic things from their favorite cartoons, for example, counting numbers in Sesame Street. As well as the young people, the adults can also learn more on language literacy from the news, for instance, BBC provides a lot of evidences in English.
Another area if effect is entertainment. It seems that people rather choose to watch the international TV shows than local because it contains a better quality, including both filming and content. Also, they are sometimes likely to be more creative, in which can be huge positive influence to young adults and many others. This can be example as music shows that bring out a lot of talent people to the world.
Last but not least, it is obviously that by watching variety of international TV shows, people can explore experiences and culture through them. For example, I tend to watch documentaries to help me understand more about other culture and how they live like the traditional Maori in New Zealand. Another example is the news that help people to keep up to date with what is happening worldwide.
All in all, I feel that globalization of television shows actually bring people together. People would be more in common with each other if more countries adopt international programmes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18992248062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87341086422 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6931472488 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109032159087 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427287948935 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558931876583 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072218201513 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347310755418 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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