In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
In modern time, we have a problem in many of our countries. They have a lot of citizens with highly qualified graduation diplomas who are unemployed. This is an issue which can not be neglected, because those people worked hard in order to do what they love and help their country. Not only they can not do what they have prepared for most of their life, but they also have existential issues. They do not have stable income, because they can not find jobs in order to support them and their families.
Many people wonder how does this happen, but the reason with such consequences is simple. There are simply too many people already working on the exact same positions that unemployed people wish they were working on right now. This happens because positions which require high degree education usually pay very well. Payouts they offer are very tempting for everyone, and it is obvious that almost everyone in the world wants to live comfortably and earn more money. Young people with higher ambitions enroll to expensive colleges and spend their whole life savings on them. Instead of high paying job, there is a high chance they end up unemployed with a worthless diploma and huge money debt. Again, a factory does not need more managers than it needs workers, which is understandable or the military simply can not function with more generals than soldiers.
However, this problem can and should be solved. One solution is to give an advantage to a more educated person for more regular and simplier jobs. This solution might be counter effective though, because then people will need high level of education for every job, even for example a supermarket cashier. The better solution is the governments need to encourage more regular job positions, and offer a bigger pay for those positions’ workers. Those types of jobs need to become more sustainable for an average person. If possible, governments should create more jobs for the population with high education aswell, but it is reasonably harder.
Finally, the chase for big careers and money led to the oversaturation of highly qualifed workers on the job market. The results can be devastating. Happiness in the community will go down, and education system will become a sink hole for money and time. I think if a nation has this problem, it should try to resolve it as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90547263682 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53057954349 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539800995025 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7389406429 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164317596418 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582097390325 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505811170535 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101187714193 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469428186093 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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