In many countries, weddings are expensive compared to the past. what is cause? it is a positive development or negative development?
It is undeniable that in contemporary era, we have seen considerable rise on spending extravagant money in marriage occasions. This, trends have demerits as well as merits which mention in following paragraph. The major cause is that people is in rat race and they spend hefty sums money on marriages for showing there is superiority in society.
To begin with, it is a irrefutable that weddings are one of the special events for many families which gives them enjoyment and pleasure. Firstly, marriage functions nowadays become attraction for one and all so, people want to give grand wedding party in their society that is why they spend a lot of money for arrange enjoyable day. In addition, this trend sometime become negative for many people because some people cannot afford such a grand weddings then they spend money by mortgage the house of properties. As a result, they become superior in eyes of society but in their case they have nothing for future.
Secondly, rituals represent our traditions and culture. Marriages are now become cost an arm and leg although, people are more believe to show their wealthness among the community and spend hefty sums money on a different rituals.However, in in the past people believe in simplicity therefore, they did marriage in simple way at temple. for instant the recent survey conducted by Times of India,renowned Indian newspaper, published article on traditional marriage function that in a past 80 percentage of adults did wedding in a simple way whereas, 20 percentage of people now interested to do marriage in foreign.
In conclusion, it is true that weddings cost is now at over head for many people.Hence, people prove themselves better than other by doing this.It seems to me that it brings negative impact on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05067567568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80261074871 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3740889582 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084202023325 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343349895047 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331405583041 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547756716953 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254569985201 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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