It is evident that in many countries, the number of marriages have seen a decline as women do not think marriage as a necessity. Some masses think this change as a result of women being able to earn more and independently. I agree with the above statement and will share some points to support it.
To begin with, the modern era shares idea of equality which gives women equal opportunities than that of men. By getting employed, they now get the satisfaction of becoming financially stable. In earlier times, wives mostly depend on their husbands as they were the ones who earn the bread and butter for their families. However, nowadays ladies can earn well and live by themselves, not depending on anyone. Thus, the equality has given the chance to explore, resulting in the above phenomenon.
Additionally, by getting earning opportunities, they now get the chance to break the men’s monotony where they hide their problems regarding their marriages. For instance, a survey held by an independent organisation in USA states that after the women revolution in 1960’s, the divorce rates in USA have risen by 200%, just because they can earn a living then. This shows the outrage of wives who were feared to got alone if talked about such things before the revolution. Also, viewing the previous cases, the present women prefer to be alone from the fear of being in unfavourable and depressing conditions.
To conclude, the equality to live in the world and having the assurance to get an earning, make women feel not to be in the bond of marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7227701523 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0093676175 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232228820537 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756343242348 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512400405044 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136751435207 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644940295735 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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