Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have
been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
The majority of law breakers frequently commit terrible crimes in spite of the harsh punishment. This essay will discuss firstly on why some offenders are carrying out crimes even though they have already been thrown into prisons, and secondly, the crucial steps which ought to be made by the regime to cut the crime rate with relevant examples.
To begin with, lack of full time employment is the paramount determinant of reoffending by many convicts. Since many employers put a top priority to those applicants who do not have criminal backgrounds, there is a high probability that numerous felo...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: However, the higher rate of recommitting evil acts can be combatted smoothly if the ministry implements the following two schemes effectively.
Error: combatted Suggestion: combated
Sentence: On the second place, trivial and major crooks must be detached, and also they have to be given vocational trainings mandatorily.
Error: mandatorily Suggestion: ?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1958 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.394 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.88 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 155 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 122 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.986 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.009 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...nt examples. To begin with, lack of full time employment is the paramount determinant...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f managers over delinquents, the ex-cons are bound to perform illegal activities ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51239669421 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9684266182 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669421487603 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3405022818 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.928571429 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207096881374 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581678823712 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058026952602 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116095911762 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629680036111 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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