many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
Tourism has been booming on an unprecedented scale, considered the primary income resource in developing countries. In this essay, we will take a closer look at the causes of tourism looming, consider the benefits of this tendency.
The major reason for the rapid growth of tourism is the great profit it might bring. Some well-conducted research gives a positive result about the enormous profits the tourism industry makes for the government in developing countries. The investment in tourism does not costly, compared with others such as the car engineer or petrol production, but it generates great revenues. Indeed, tourism has become one of the major players in international commerce.
We consider the advantages of tourism; its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, the tourist industries create job opportunities for third-world citizens. The flourish of attractive destinations will bring much employment in restaurants, hotels, or travel services that help tackle employment issues or joblessness for developing countries. As a result, the standard of living in the deprived area is going to improve. Secondly, the tourism industry's investment in tourism industries is a chance to advertise the traditional custom and culture in a particular area. It attracts many travelers who not only visit attractive destinations but also want to explore and experience the typical cultural features that differ from their countries. The diversity in the approach customer methods makes expanding the tourist industry in developing countries can compete with the developed nation in the same fields. It boosts the tourism market in the world works effectively.
To sum up, the tourism industry is a profitable economic factor. Consider all of the advantages it could bring, and we should develop this judiciously and sustainably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, well, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55714285714 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02468584977 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2723152426 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229719709201 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676427801064 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791864526694 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133612415823 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545639460774 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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