Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.
Why do you think this happens?
How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
Adopting a regular fitness regime is advisable to the elderly by the majority of medical practitioners. Nonetheless, a minority of patients are recorded to follow the doctrine. I contend that there are several underlying factors involved in this procrastination and some measures could be suggested to alleviate the situation.
Potentially, this phenomenon could be justified by a variety of explanations, chief of which is the lack of self-discipline for which activities that are included in the treatment regimen. In terms of the senior residents, activities such as socializing as the fundamental demand to avoid loneliness or cultivating botanical garden tend to occupy most of their retirement ages. Yet, most of them are incapable of integrating different tasks to accomplish at the same time simply out of their physique capabilities, and in turn, they will weigh more on personal preferences. Hence, the idea to adjust their daily routines for physical exercises is not always feasible as the elderly nervous system functions based on a limited capacity of memorizing, they may not be conscious about changes but the familiar schedule.
On the other hand, the most viable solution to raise public health awareness and keeping fit is to execute the provision of public sports facilities. For one, not only the accessibility for senior citizens is increased but also youngsters are the beneficiaries given the opportunities for training and participating under a spiritual environment. The gap between generations is eliminated and people immerse in the joy and pleasure of practicing team sports such as badminton and shuttlecock while in the meantime, the elderly could teach the youths yoga. Such projects should be implemented widely owing to the fact that certain rural areas do not have access to those amenities. By doing so, social equality could be promoted and general public health could be tremendously ameliorated.
To conclude, there are excuses for the procrastinated fitness programme in senior residents. Otherwise, steps should be taken immediately to ensure individuals’ physical well-being in accordance with equal accessibility to sports facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
...e meantime, the elderly could teach the youths yoga. Such projects should be implement...
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Line 5, column 733, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
..., social equality could be promoted and general public health could be tremendously ameliorate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55988023952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23037242971 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3717006996 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.642857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139682843063 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414952082086 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277889610062 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733910802791 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247897170372 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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