Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine.
Why do you think this happens?
How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
In this current society, several doctors advise older people to engage in physical activities on a regular basis, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. From my perspective, this issue is derived from several reasons and a variety of solutions can be used to tackle this problem.
There are numerous reasons that the older ignore the advice of doctors to do exercise regularly. First, most patients are accustomed to staying at home and devote most of their time to using social media instead of going out to work out, so it will be difficult to make them follow an exercise routine. If they do exercise occasionally, their muscle will be hurt because they haven’t involved in doing exercise for a long time and they have to use all their strength to tone up their body, which makes them feel disappointed and decide to give up doing exercise regularly. Second, the subjective reason is their personal ailment which can be the factor that makes them hard to follow an exercise routine because it can deprive their inherent physical strength. For example, cancer patients have difficulty in doing exercise on regular basis because that kind of diseases is considered as one of the most hazardous ailments for human and the patients have to use numerous medication and therapy to treat the disease, which will make them always feel exhausted and unable to do vigorous activities. That are the reasons why many people do not follow the advice of doctors to engage in regular exercise.
This issue can be tackled by several methods. To begin with, the doctors should stimulate their patients with distinctive types of recreational activities, if they want their patients to do exercise regularly such as organizing a small competition for the patients to participate in which will bring them exhilarating experience and encourage them to do more exercise or doing exercise together with the patients to make them feel closer to each other. Additionally, in terms of patients, they have to change their mindset by do online research about the advantages of working out and disadvantages of not doing exercise regularly and take the initiative to exercise more in order to improve their physical strength and against the detrimental consequences of the disease which will enable them to be healthier and get well soon.
In conclusion, although most patients do not work out occasionally, it can be tackled by several means of different measures which will make patients to do exercise on a regular basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02870813397 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7029851133 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.746206356 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.166666667 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46451314498 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216238643891 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939041684896 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328252328559 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326133927978 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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