many elderly people are no longer cared for by their families and are put in care homes or nursing homes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Putting old people in care homes and nursing homes is a practice that is gaining popularity in recent times. this essay will explain the positivity of this, among which is to eradicate loneliness amongst the elderly, while also talking about its disadvantages.
On one hand, the care and nursing homes avail its occupants the services of trained caregivers. These caregivers have been trained to understand the peculiarity of each elder and treat them accordingly. Also, loneliness and depression are one of the leading causes of the death of the aged ones. The nursing and care homes offer the elderly an opportunity to relate with their peers. The relive old times, share meals, play games among other activities, these things help to keep them rejuvenated. A documentary I once watched showed the occupants of a care home being tasked with the job of tending a garden. They were to make a weekly note on the progress of the garden. This was meant to keep them engaged and give them ownership over something.
On the other hand, when the aged are kept in nursing homes, the tendency for their families to forget them is higher. Their families believe they are in good hands, reduce their visiting times, and eventually stop visiting. As much as there are people to keep them company, seeing their beloves families would bring them a joy that is second to none. Considering that these elders are within the confines of a home, they are more likely to forge the things that are outside the home. Shopping in a physical shop, visiting friends and families, driving a car are examples of the things they might not be able to do while in a care and nursing home. For instance, an aged woman, who lived down my street, was taken to a nursing home as her family believed she was too old to live all by herself. She constantly complained to her caregivers how much she misses visiting people. She explained that visiting helped to refresh her memory. In her sixth month in the home, she developed Alzheimer and overtime she couldn't recognize her children.
In conclusion, the growing trend of keeping the elderly in nursing snd care homes has its advantages which include having capable hands take care of them and a disadvantage of their families neglecting them in these homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, second, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80867346939 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50930043259 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52806122449 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9613311449 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37401549506 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108376246696 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107254132339 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255033835487 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521854372438 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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