many employees may work at home with modern technologies
Fifteen or twenty years ago, few people could have imagined that the modern technology would impact us so greatly. However, whether people have a tendency to work or study with hi-tech devices from home bring negative influence or positive is a controversial issue. I am of the opinion that this action would do more pros than cons.
There are significant benefits associated with working and studying online. First of all, it is obvious that the online world has made our lives infinitely more convenient due to the proliferation of the Internet. This means that individuals can gain access to any information or knowledge with the click of a mouse rather than spending a day long in a library. Therefore we can work remotely and spend more quality time with family. Moreover, this innovation has a crucial role in improving work efficiency. For example, more and more online retailers participate in an e-commerce market such as Amazon and overcome geographical barriers to easily access customer around the world. If people make the most of hi-tech features, they not only can work in their house, but enhance their productivity and earn more profits.
This is not to say that relying on hi-tech devices would not bring drawbacks to individuals. There are, of course, with the resulting indulge in the virtual world, people would get into trouble with both physical and psychological problems. For instance, children spend a lot of their time in using the internet instead of interacting with people in a real life and doing outdoor exercise. Consequently, they would become solitary and weaken relationship with their loved ones. But still, the advantages are far greater.
In conclusion, with an increasing popularity of modern technology, working and studying at home is becoming a positive trend throughout the world. Meanwhile, people should avoid using too much on smart computer to reduce its negative effect. I believe we will find a way to let the hi-tech devices be shaped by our lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... than spending a day long in a library. Therefore we can work remotely and spend more qua...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10606060606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7478165637 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1984999034 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196000332495 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597849701737 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696020514428 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121574391812 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030149396987 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.