Many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home.
As a result, employees will have much more flexible working hours in the future. Is this a positive or negative development?
Several companies have an idea of allowing their employees to work from home. So, they can better manage their schedules. Despite some drawbacks, I think it is more beneficial in working at home.
There are two main reasons to support an idea of working at home. Firstly, people do not waste their time in commuting. Lots of employees, especially in several big cities, face adversity in travelling. They have to deal with traffic congestions as well as long-distance travelling. Working from home certainly alleviates these problems and people will have more time to do what they want. Secondly, it will help us in managing the life schedules. With more flexible time in working hours, this will absolutely benefit many workers who have families as well as kids. They can choose working time and finish all tasks their companies ask for. Therefore, they have a free time in educating their children and have no problems in routine like picking up their kids after school time.
On the other hand, working from home have some negative effects. To begin with, due to atmosphere and an environment, employees are more prone to be lazy and lack motivation in working. At home, nobody can force them to work. Sometimes, it will lead to bad outcomes because the employees start to do tasks few hours before a deadline. Apart from that, in some kinds of works, face-to-face meetings are crucial. For example, psychologists can better give an effective advice when they sit in front of their clients. they can perceive an eye contact, body languages as well as tones of voice.
In conclusion, despite a drawback about motivation and problems in some careers, working from home is quite better in saving times for travelling as well as managing the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61657589329 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8566583815 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311685497311 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100667360349 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836097790503 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202542645486 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707482843108 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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