Many factors motivate in their workplace money is most important factor do you agree or diagree

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Many factors motivate in their workplace money is most important factor do you agree or diagree

There is no doubt that motivation reaches to people on high destination.The number of components encourage people for their jobs including money is the most important component. I am agree with statement .I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark with, money is an indispensable role in everyone s life.worker do more hard work for promotion their jobs.They want to get high wages through making more efforts in jobs center.They pay more attention towards work and eventually don"t care about meal. In this way,they get success of good salary and live in luxurious life.In addition,worker makes effort due to fear of cut money in their wages.so they do work in better way .if employees success of giving best performance to company .so,employer can gives credit as a good work for example worker is 8,000salary .when they gives best feedback toward work .so those time they receive gift money from manager.
Moreover,superiors and inferiors becomes strong relationship which helps to create harmony relationship in workplace.so,they can better feel better to client and provides full satisfication with their work.Despite of this, employees feel bored and get stress in life which makes uncomfortable to them.
To close ,although money is best way to improve financial problem of company but person should be focus towards health.
To conclude, although money is best way to improve problem of company financial but employees must pay towards health

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31223628692 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06306446837 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.630998695 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.857142857 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111473373447 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571351139925 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442755921107 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609985081077 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459638525257 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.