Factors in workplace motivate to people

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Factors in workplace motivate to people

There is no doubt that motivation reaches to people on high destination.The number of components encourage people for their jobs including money is the most important componet. I am agree with statement .I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark with, money is indispensable role in everyone s life.worker do more hardwork for promotion their jobs.They want to get high wages through making more efforts in jobs center.They pay more attention towards work and eventually don"t care about meal. In this way,they get success of good salary and live in luxurious life.In addition,worker makes effort due to fear of cut money in their wages.so they do work in better way .if employees success of giving best performance to company .so,employer can gives credit as a good work for example worker is 8,000salary .when they gives best feedback toward work .so those time they receive gift money from manager.
Moreover,superiors and inferiors becomes strong relationship which helps to create hormony relationship in workplace.so,they can better feel better to client and provides full satisfication with their work.Despite of this, employees feel bored and get stress in life which makes uncomfortable to them.
To conclude ,although money is best way to improve finacial problem of company but person should be focus towards health.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35648148148 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10738519725 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.967375342 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.833333333 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0433981791195 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329991326375 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737883037761 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366989306102 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635644124003 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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