Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability while others believe that there are more important factors involved in success in sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue over whether physical ability is the most crucial aspect in achieving success in sports, while others argue that other essential variables are involved. In my opinion, physical prowess is necessary for success in sports since most sporting activities entail some sort of physical ability, but having a strong mind is essential to help increase one's chances of winning.
On the one hand, physical ability is undeniably a crucial factor in achieving success in sports. Athletes must possess the requisite strength, speed, agility, and endurance to excel in their chosen discipline. In a football game, for example, the team with players that are physically able to cover more ground faster has a better chance of winning. This also happens in most other sports. It is clear that a well-trained physique can boost the likelihood of victory.
On the other hand, success in sports is not solely determined by physical prowess. Athletes must be able to withstand pressure, adapt to changing situations, and maintain their focus, especially in high-stakes competitions. In sports such as basketball, for instance, even when the opposing team is in greater physical condition, the team with superior plans and preparation not only overwhelms the opponent but ultimately causes them to lose the game. Clearly, in instances like these, intellectual capacity is crucial in sports.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, i believe that having a solid intellect is crucial to succeeding on the sports field, even while physical talent helps boost one's chances of winning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35856573705 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75548056284 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2880776832 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265919516003 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906996497164 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881632160909 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158653803662 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637320063953 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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