Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability while others believe that there are more important factors involved in success in sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In modern society, physical activities are a basic condition for athletics to be successful and it is the only one. In my essay, I think that the physical factor is a fundamental background to play sports although sport technologies and luck are significant .
On the one hand, the demand of physical activities is undeniable. First of all, many athletes have to play during several hours such as running, swimming, or jumping with a high pressure. This is the reason that players who have physical capacity could keep some advantages in a match. So, a strong body is a minimum requirement in professional sports. To be additional, ability in using parts of body lexibly is helpful for players to maintain a great performance in many years in order to reach a top-ranked table in sports. For instance, because Roger who is a tennis players and rarely has unwanted problems relevant to health has been playing tennis for more 20 years, he is an iconic of achievement in tennis.
On the other hand, using technologies in sports and being lucky enable for players to win the beating games. Specifically, modern sports are dependent on data science and technology. For example, Liverpool football club build a research and development technology team that they collect all information of home team and visitors are input to computer systems for analysis purposes. The results are used by coaching teams to train players and then they will reply these virtual actions that computers advised. Moreover, so sports like games, lucky is very meaningful to win an important match. The final between Argentina and France is an obvious illustration for this because the penalty is like lotteria after two teams have a draw score although Messi and MBappe are excellent, and then Argentina beat France by lucky penalties.
On conclusion, I believe that both physical activities are minimum demand in professional sports and applying data technologies and being lucky are significant for athletes to become a legend of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11178247734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8321647051 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.158212494 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150934076432 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543602477147 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541112871531 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110298889762 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545896211344 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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