Many favourite athletes advertise different products. what are the advantage and disadvantages of this.
Advertisement are suppose to be the form of mass communication. Presently, plethora of advertisements are endorse by eminent sports player and this trend gaining prevalence day by day. Here, I would like to account it's positives along with it's negatives.
There are manifold advantages of this phenomenon. First and foremost, companies can boost the productivity by hiring players for distinct adverts. To illustrate, sports players can easily allure people towards products because athletes are the centre of attraction for them, people love to follow sports player.Therefore, people give more interest to those products which is endorse by prominent players. Moreover, this idea is lucrative for people, they can not only save their time but also keep themselves away from comparison in different product. They just need to purchase the product without more think about other products because the product is endorse by players. On the other side, opposite wind is also there.
To begin with, initially, advertisement which is advertise by the athletes make people extravagant, To be specific, company exaggerate the product information and it has huge influence on people.As a result, they purchase things unnecessarily. Apart from it, this trend enhance the pollution level, people throw old things into landfill sites and buy new things. Hence, advertising which advertise by sports not only make people spendthrift but also increase the pollution level.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, this trend has some benefits. However, still I believe that it has more cons than pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52674897119 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94854746579 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4622971597 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138889007062 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543864507457 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544909866385 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812609478528 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273326965197 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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