Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The economic advancement is perceived as the crucial goal by numerous government. It is arguable by many people because other sectors are reasonably essential for the country. This essay disagrees with the statement as that economic is mainly goals for the country improvement.
Economic sector is often seen as the only crucial matter for the country since the root of all problems facing by a nation is the failure of the economic status. The failing of nation’s economic sector would lead to the gravest problem such as monetary crisis and it could rapidly affect citizen life such as lost unemployment as well as increase the basic goods prize. If such issues happen, it will lead to other national difficulties such as poverty, criminality and so on. Therefore, most of the government in the world believed that improving economic sector means solving the country’s biggest issue.
The proponent of this idea sees that other sectors such as education and health are equally important for one nation as the sectors are main factors to produce a good quality of human resources. Without providing proper education and health, the country would be lost its resources to develop the nation economic. Consequently, the improvement of the nation would not happen because it lacks of healthy and educated workforce.
In my opinion, governments focusing on economic sector improvement as the nation’s main target is a biased view, since there are other sectors such as education and health which is equally important and require government attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82389801516 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1031992842 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156248056203 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676986389491 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526178654922 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116875407124 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518324270491 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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