There has been a difference in opinion, in the unit of measure for a country's progress, in that, while most governments base it on the economic status of the country, other individuals argue that other types of progress are just as important. I believe that the economic status alone, isn't enough to quantify the developmental status of a country.
To begin with, a country may have an overall rich economic status, however, this won't necessarily translate to the standards of life of all its citizens. In other words, there may be a huge financial status gap between the poor and the rich people in a country, owing to the fact that financial empowerment might, not be within everyone's reach, therefore, if the status is based on the rich population, the poorer ones are disregarded, hence a clear picture of how things are is not captured. As a way of illustration, most countries termed as developed countries, have so many of its citizens struggling to make ends meet which unfortunately doesn't mirror the developmental status of that particular country.
On the other hand,I believe factors such as level of education and overall health status are equally important. This means that if the government should empower its citizens with education to provide a platform for everyone willing, to develop, Moreover, facilitate health and healthy living and thus life because without this aspect, there will be no citizens to rule. For instance in Kenya, education and treatment in all public institutions are free. This has seen to healthier, more educated community.
In conclusion,while economic growth is very vital to the development of a nation, other aspects such as education and health, need to be given a priority too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09122807018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90994199056 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5397568386 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148198868117 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606236803058 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727614515387 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970377242838 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791349260197 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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