Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern times, the number of government's priority isto develop the economic, while other people believe that it is also important to improve different categories as much as economy for a great deal forcountries. This essay will discuss both arguments and provide my opinion.
Indeed, the government can not ignore economicdevelopment, nor to put other duties in priority. Perhaps, the reason why is that people normally judge them by the growth of the economy each year, so the government is an urge to prove it they are doing the job. For instance, to become a strong government, they need support from the citizens, thus, to gain full support from the residents, they must focus on economic the most.
Despite these points of view, many people today think as it matters, other facts should be handled as important. To become a strong country, economic development is not a single problem to tackle, such as the benefits of the citizen should be improved and the environmental system should be maintained, to gain natural energy. If these issues controlled by the government, the economy will improve itself. For example, if the environment is being maintained and controlled, the country would get free energy out of it, also money from the tourists, therefore, the economy will follow freely.
To sum up, it can be a choice of the government which point they should aim to develop, however, it is evident that if they looking at bigger ways and try to develop people’s wealth and the environment first, the economy will be developed as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02692307692 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8315085782 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0220451968 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147205549759 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599164243187 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042476675194 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851707803557 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412824579788 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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