Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
While governments are concentrating on the country’s economic development because they see that’s is the most important one, the citizens have contrasting views which are other forms of aspects that need improving simultaneously. From my point of view, I totally concur with the economy is an essential factor, but other forms of progress are needed to be considered carefully.
To start with three key reasons why economic growth has currently become the fundamental metric for national progress by governments around the world. First of all, the development of the economy generates more tax revenue for the government. From that cash flow, the government can be able to invest in other fields of society such as healthcare, education, the environment, or what else that they see as lacking or necessary. Secondly, job opportunities are in ratio with the economic growth that makes the unemployment rate decreased results in the citizen’s living standard will be better. Last but not least, a strong economy can help to boost the power in terms of international relations and reputation, which allows for more influence and trading power on the global stage.
Other forms of progress that exist independent from economic progress can be equally relevant in measuring a country’s success. For instance, the limited crime rate can manifest how well a country has governed its citizens and keep strengthening social security. Regardless of the wealth of a country, it will not have a satisfied and healthy population if the environment is in ruin. Alternatively, the overall happiness of its residents can be an extremely relevant measure of a country’s success.
In a nutshell, while it is obvious that economic health is a key marker of a country’s success, other educational, environmental, social security metrics are equally significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: ITS_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'that is'?
Suggestion: that is
...s economic development because they see that’s is the most important one, the citizens ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3595890411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12821611574 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2606248829 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225495287048 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794979469704 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683635693157 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135859692958 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297866145519 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.