Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everyone has different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that others are equally important.
There are several reasons why economic progress is seen as a crucial key for countries. First of all, economic development gives ample job creation for citizens. It is undeniable that the establishment of many factories makes a great contribution to various job vacancies. As a result, the less the unemployment rate becomes, the more benefits the countries can be got. Furthermore, the economy plays an important role in enhancing frustration as well as public service. For instance, one country with higher revenue will invest more in hospitals, schools, or road systems. Finally, the economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
However, I would argue that other forms of progress are as important as economic factors. In particular, we should consider social justice, human rights, and democracy itself. A clear example is that the civilization of a country is reflected through its attitude toward minor groups. Another considerable key to judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects and preserve its natural beauty. If a country has abundant natural resources, it will become a rich country. Last but not least, the progress of a country is measured by looking at the health, well-being, and happiness of its residents. Once residents feel satisfied with life quality, it means that country gets better because the spiritual values that everyone gets from their country reflect thoroughly on the life quality of that country.
In conclusion, economic development is obviously a necessary factor in the progress of a country, but the social environment, health criteria, or natural preservation are equally significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l preservation are equally significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, of course, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42434210526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94030373947 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8617105523 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24907034971 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770943194002 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583466658132 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154806441163 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482102264957 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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