Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, people have two diverging views about how government should measure their country’s progress. Although some argue that economic progress is the most essential role, I personally agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are similarly weighty.
There are several reasons why economic growth can be seen as the primary purpose of a country. First, a healthy economy can make a great result in job creation, transport network and other social services. In fact, if individuals’ income grew dramatically, the government would raise more and more resources by imposing the tax to cover the debt spending. Moreover higher revenues also can be used to invest in improving infrastructure and dealing with problems like traffic congression, natural disaster or even the social evils. Second, economic progress also ensures for nations to facilitate the globalization, which is the consequence of falling in unemployment rates and other political issues.
Besides the development of one’s national economy, other aspects also need to be treated as vitally important as the economic factor. First, human rights and citizen happiness and satisfaction should be considered as one of the most priority of authority bodies. For instance, a comprehensively developed country has narrowed the gap between the walks of life and took more concern on the poor and minority groups to maintain society’s equality. In addition, the key factor as judging the progress of a country is environmental sustainability. For example, the Chinese economy has been overheating recently, but the air pollutant increasing dramatically was the extra threats to people's health.
In conclusion, it is clear that the economic factor plays an important role in development. However, the others such as environment protection, well-being, and citizen’s happiness should be equivalently taken care
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ing the tax to cover the debt spending. Moreover higher revenues also can be used to inv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67708333333 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19355173215 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9829610843 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206368161168 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654757664299 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527044693971 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1265951425 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583045477579 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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