Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Whilst admission fee has to be paid in numerous museums, others allow people to go in freely. As far as I am concerned, although there can be no doubt that this practice can create a negative impression on the thought of visitors to a certain extent, I assert a belief that paying admission fee will do better than harm.
One the one hand, the option to paying entrance fee in museums can exert many negatives in that it can lead to a decrease in visitors. The fact of the matter is that museums opened and operated just facilitate people, especially students to have access to historic values from ancestors such as the evolution of humans being or antiquity,... and they are not naturally commercial activities.Thus, charging for entrance can reduce people’s interest in discovering nationalist heritage. Another disadvantage is that a small group of people on the societal level can take a chance of getting profit by increasing the price of tickets. In other words, they can change the fixed price of the tickets by producing other ones with dear prices, then sell for visitors or foreigners. For example, in many museums, numerous people are fined for fraud in charge.
Despite the above-mentioned disadvantages, I believe that this activity might be associated with many beneficial effects on supporting money to provide more renovation for museums. To be more specific, the money received from charge for admission can become an available source of capital for renovating material facilities instead of calling for the budget allocation of authority or sponsorship of non-governmental organizations. Hence, paying for affordable entrance tickets is an effective shift in creating an income to supply more investment on decoration as well as exhibitions. Moreover, museums charging for admission make efforts to introduce many policies to give students or children a discount when visiting to encourage them. For instance, Hoa Lo - a renowned museum in Ha Noi introduced a entrance charge with many discounts for students, therefore, recently it have attracted thousands of people coming everyday.
To conclude, this trend might possess many disadvantages. However, I am more inclined to the view that charge for admission with a reasonable price and will likely prevail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27945205479 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04567855212 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578082191781 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8371809933 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.466666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364151358831 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123308412582 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764722515123 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206122361481 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743575373552 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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