Many museums charge for admission while othre are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admision to museums outweight the disadvantages?
In this era, people have been forgetting about the past:culture: culture, tradition, lifestyle and things, owing to that, many museums built for remaining our previous custome.many museums take entry fees of enrollment ,while others are free of change.I I think I think the merits of taking fees for admission two museums more than the demerits.
To embark with, museum museum is only one major source to remaining our previous culture. Some museums run by NGO and other run by the government more than museums charge for admission fees, owing to that, it is profitable -entry fees help full to improve and rice income of authors or government apart from that, entry fee through management changes look of museums and due to that people attract to know about antic piece of past. In addition nominal fees for enrollment is helpful to maintain the maintenance and ID defend our previous antique pieces. For an example, in Rajasthan one well known and Museum built by the government. It is very fascinating and people are attract near the museums. Many people visit there. Not only locals are enjoying the museums' beauty but also foreiner come to visit, due to that, it is inclines our income.
On the other hand museums are giving free entry which are run by both they want people know about past but museums give free Android mint nevertheless they are not visiting in addition museums expense like security electricity construction ola expenses given by government or owner in their account it is decline income and losing economey of nation. But fruitful for student .they can free larn the previous culture.For an example, in american'a government give free entry in any museums for all genration.
To complete, government should take normal fees for visiting museums for people who can affordable the charging fees more over they have to give free entry in museums for learn about economy and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, apart from, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50526915943 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.458339236 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.090909091 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373568057254 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155644390527 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872854774699 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270283452488 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317067602396 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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