Many offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
After being released from the first sentence, offenders tend to recommit more crime. There are several reasons for this problem such as affection of bad society in prison or lack of rehabilitation, and some solutions for could be implemented to improve this setback.
Firstly, the main reason for offenders commit crime again after being released from prison is that the short of rehabilitation ability while locked behind the cell. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to learn new skills and training for future development after a long times serving in prison understanding the guilty action they have done before. Therefore, with a criminal record also, first times criminal hardly have a chance to associate with community. Secondly, bad behavior can be affected by other criminals while in prison. The difficult life behind the cell with pressure from the kingpin and other bad prisoners might create a negative attitude toward one characteristic.
However, there are two measures can be put forward to solve this problem. For example, the government can take action on providing training programs such as in engineering, construction skill,... arming the prisoner with necessary knowledge for them to come back to society with the feeling of useful. Another method is that strict supervision should be taken more serious to serial criminal in prison, prevent them from affecting bad behaviour to other cellmates.
In conclusion, it's can be clearly seen that there various reason for a first times criminal recommit a crime again after serving the first punishment. Whether the reason is in short of rehabilitation or influenced by other criminals in prison, the government play an important role in measuring this problem by their actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78860655716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4065142091 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276621688981 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109162430575 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877812119316 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198140142936 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648149396988 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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