Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that the proportion of criminals recommitted is increasing after they are released.This essay bellow will discuss the reasons and some possible measures that universities and individuals can take to address these problems.
There are a number of factors which can be considered as the major causes of this phenomenon. The main reason is that it is not easy for convicts to survive after completing sentence. That can be seen by the fact that the majority of criminals is those who are poor, uneducated and unskilled to maintain a job. In consequence, without a certain job, there is no means for them to sustain their life. Another key reason is that societies tend to hold a negative view of offenders which result in they becoming more isolated and being difficult to blend in with community. At that time, criminals may reunite to form groups and may plan crimes with others
There are several actions that government and societies could take to help offenders avoid recommitting. I think the most obvious solution for authorities is to provide inmates with vocational trainings rather than just keeping them in cells. In Vietnam, for example, lawbreakers always take part in a wide range of courses such as handmade, car maintenance that do not require highly skilled level. By doing this, offenders may find suitable jobs for their living. Another remedy can be used to combat the problem is that governments and societies should continue campaigns to change citizens’ attitudes toward prisoners. This means that criminals may find easier to come back and feel a sense of comfort in communities, therefore they would not be reoffended any more.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise to the increase in recommitting among criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11073825503 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81641198665 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8092604546 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221870249217 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747820141409 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603451859475 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137291556136 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494722511639 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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