Most of the offenders do more crimes after experiencing their first punishment mainly because of two reasons i.e, difficulty finding regular job after getting released and difficulty in getting back to their life they had before prisioned. their are many solutions to handle this problem.
When offenders are being prisioned for the first time their will not be any classes or situations that teach the exact moral behaviour instead it allows them to stay with all the criminals which increases the criminal intentions. Criminals will also be having the guilt behaviour which leads to frustation og being prisioned. once they got released they will not be able to retain their life because of less oppurutinities they have to survive in the outside world. Secondly, they will not be able to find job after released. the need of money for basic necessity leads them to take part in crime for the second time. after people come from prison they are not trusted by anyone to give some or the other job which increases the crime rate.
To slove this problems, To offenders who are prisioned for the first time their must be classes which helps them to be aware of moral behaviour teaching DO's and DONT's and allow them to communicate with other criminals on the morals. Police should not allow them to communicate which increases their criminal intentions. Making them learn skills also helps them to survive in the outside world once they got released and it will be even more helpful if government provide them with some financial support. Authority needs to keep a watch and supervision on the place their are back to the society which makes them to be aware of being observed and they will not dare to make mistakes because they will be jailed in the next minute.
To conclude, by introducing moral behaviour classes and supervision on the criminals who are reoffended can lead to drop down in crime rate if government impliments the methods mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91265060241 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49181232909 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478915662651 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7962488708 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161997924643 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721810139323 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544120789991 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110108598635 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503578611475 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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