Many people believe that authority should mainly concentrate on critical problems society is facing than spending tons of money on art. Personally i think that their are many problems that authority should focus on than on arts. However, in some countries some people can't afford food.
Admittedly, Their are few justifications that force people to believe that art is essential. Art plays a key role in culture and the country having good culture will attract many tourists which in turn will increase government economy. Art keeps human soul pleasant. Assume a empty room without a small paint on the walls how boring it looks. france and spain attracts many people because of the art the countries have. people spend so much money and go to the places to experience the beauty of art which even raises millons of money for ecomony.
I still think that governement shouldn't spend so much money on arts, Because their are people who dont cant survive because they dont have money for basic needs countries like bangladesh they are sufferig with poverty and many economical problems, In that situation their is no point to focus on art when they can't meet their basic needs. It will be helpful if country focus on main problems like poverty than focusing more on arts. Can spend handsome amount of money on arts which alos preserves arts and culture and even look after country economy
To sum up, it is clear that government can focus on arts if the countrys ecomony is good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85826771654 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32426220646 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7677228734 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192840154931 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756866572025 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045483061101 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121831716469 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317701409353 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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