In recent years, people shift from one country to the other for work. It is thought by some that it effects their children's future, while it is thought by some it benefits children. In my opinion, i believe that their are more advantages than disadvantages.
While we know that money is not the key to happiness, a lack of money can certainly sometimes lead to misery. people who are less successful than they'd otherwise be because they spend their entire life chasing for enough money to live. Moving to other countries for work eventually helps parents to setup a road for success to their children. Many move to the best neighborhood they can afford which helps them to explore new opportunities, new life, which is hard for them to find in their own countries. For instance, Considering middle class person who moved to other country for work is ultimately going to help his family to be in better position by giving financial support, provide his children with good education and good environment to stay which takes them into a path of success. otherwise end up his whole life chasing for enough money to provide better life to their children.
Their will be kids who's aim is to become entrepreneurs and parents need to ensure them they will always support them mentally and financially. Being in their own countries parents can not ensure their children dreams to become successful with the middle class budget families. parents also help them to become resilient in case of any financial problems. however, Their will be some disadvantages such as when children are grown at high level environment they will set up their mind believing that they are rich enough. It's essential to make children understand the basic level of parents and struggles they faced as a child which makes them to be aware of their personal situations.
To conclude, moving to other countries for work ultimately helps them to set their kids up for success and happiness in their own lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89910979228 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58044245575 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498516320475 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3833522543 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0689851710883 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300645837329 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320643373951 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045565251829 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160812451123 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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