Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether youngsters are to remain or exit homes when they mature has become a question under contention among parents. While a majority agrees they should stay for security and health, others and myself, hold the opinion that leaving home for other cities is better, to enable them face the competitive world and secure good jobs.

On the one hand, proponents of adolescents remaining, even when up to age, argue that they are safer and healthier at home. This is because ones’ homes constitute of family members and kindred who love themselves and would not endanger the lives of their own. Young adults and adults alike, are completely assured of being safe at home. Furthermore, that food sources are mostly natural, means people consume majorly balanced diet, not processed food. Consequently, they are free from diseases such as cancer, which is mostly caused by eating junks. To illustrate, a report concluded that the healthiest people on the globe are the ones who consume organic diets.

On the contrary, others believe that adolescents should vacate homes once they become adults to cities where they would be faced with competition from age mates, as well as enable them be gainfully employed. Leaving home for cities to meet different people from all walks of life means one would be challenged to succeed by comparing oneself with mates and striving to compete with them. Also, there are enormous job opportunities in the cities. People can gain employment easily in multinational corporations and earn a good living from it when they leave there.

In conclusion, while most parents accept their younger ones stay at home for safety and good health, others and I, prefer they leave for cities to face the world and live a quality life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48842338 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5940545259 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345197694191 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113615462004 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697601495178 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218515601989 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348384575716 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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