In many parts of the world, people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home. This is a bad idea because home-cooked food is much better for us.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many developing and developed countries, prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants are so popular among people who are too busy and do not have time to cook by themselves at home. But I do not agree as they are harmful to health and home-cooked meals are better for us. Junk food could lead to unhealthy lifestyle; however they are maybe cheaper and convenient.
Many people know that convenient food contributes to problem with health but they do not follow this. Processes food is full of food additives which influence our whole body that cause grassy overweight and heart problems. People would try to go on a diet to tackle these problems, but it would never last. In addition stale ingredients are used to prepare fast food which contribute to food poisoning.
However, there are some advantages of prepared food. The price is cheaper than organic food's which is not obtainable for everyone as many people do not afford to buy them always. Nevertheless, it does not mean that we must buy them always. We can also replace them with fresh produce (fruits and vegetables). Afterwards, this kind of food could save our time because we can get meals by calling to restaurants with no matter where we are.
In conclusion, even though preparing food is popular in many countries, people must pay attention to their eating habitats. As a result, eating a balanced diet leads to healthy lifestyle without any problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9132231405 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60997767636 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5891290723 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9285714286 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341134151833 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109863853155 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984812396176 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195930505961 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127916677354 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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