Many people are travelling to other countries. Is it a positive or a negative trend?
In this day and age, tourism has developed so significantly thanks to advances in travel technology and increasing holiday entitlement. As a consequence, a large number of tourists are travelling to other countries. This trend obviously has its own benefits and drawbacks.
To outline the advantages, the flood of travelers helps boost the economy. The revenue generated annually thanks to tourism development is considerable. For instance, during the peak season which is summer, people coming to well-known sites or fascinating beaches contribute a major proportion of both private, local and national incomes. An additional strength of tourism on a country is the number of business opportunities that open up for the local people. To illustrate, hotels, bars, transport, activities, shops, and restaurants all need staffing and this leads to more job opportunities to the locals of each country.
On the other hand, it is believed that a great quantity of travelers could do harm to the country because of some undeniable disadvantages. The most serious negative aspect is environmental problem. Tourism often cause direct damage with risks such as pollution, loss of habitats or erosion. Especially during peak season, hundreds of thousands of people rush to a tourism sites every year could spoil the ancient construction if neglect. Another downside would be poor behaviors from tourists. For example, the custom of not being intoxicated in public could be made a joke among foreigners and undermine the traditional beliefs of local people.
To conclude, it is worth considering that there are both advantages and disadvantages of many tourists coming to other nations. The benefits are economy development and job opportunities while the obstacles are environmental damage and poor behaviors from travelers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... holiday entitlement. As a consequence, a large number of tourists are travelling to other countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51428571429 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12697080712 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6259134513 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192213515492 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535225215613 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541722275271 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102705319002 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313424429788 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.