Nowadays many people are trying to seek fame and become celebrity. Do the advantages outweigh the advantages?
Today a large number of people are finding ways in order to become well-known. While I agree that this decision has several drawbacks, I argue that these would be outweighed by the benefits.
On the one hand, becoming popular means receiving notoriety. No matter how kind-hearted or devoted a singer or an actor may be, he or she would always be the center of unwanted attention. For example, if an artist engaged in voluntary work, those who were prying would make up stories that he was doing that with view to promoting his name. Besides, celebrities often suffer from burnout. To illustrate, extremely tight schedules make famous people have little time to rest and get fatigue eventually.
On the other hand, the positive aspects of becoming famous would prove to be more important. First, being a star means a high salary. Superstars are often appreciated by a huge body of fans who are willing to pay a fortune just to see their idols. Moreover, they also get sponsored generously by clothing, cosmetic or beverage brands to advertise their products. Second, once a person become popular, he could travel anywhere, at any time. He could arrange his shows or meetings to be the next destinations without any obstacles. Last but not least, celebrities could be beneficial to the society. Since they are well-paid, they are expected to do as much charity as possible and hardly can anyone deny his responsibility.
To conclude, there are several negative aspects of becoming renowned regarding notoriety and burnout. However, it is undeniable that the advantages are far more worthy in terms of significantly high wage, ability to travel and social benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Today a large number of people are finding ways in order to bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05072463768 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77081541869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670289855072 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9953674404 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125498623698 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358848735614 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277678090084 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077107491498 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186771023406 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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