The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
It is true that a growing number of people see social applications as a substitute for meeting in person nowadays. Despite the obvious advantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are two major benefits of having a chat through social media. When it comes to people who are immigrating to another place and live far from family, Messenger, Skype, Instagram can connect them with their parents and siblings. Because those immigrants hardly see family members in-person, social applications are the best option for them to meet the family. Hence, they can lessen their homesickness and stay focused on their study or work. In addition, social platforms are also the perfect place for youngsters to make friends who are foreigners since social networking website is for everyone. Young people can take this occasion to discover their alien friends' culture, tradition, cuisine, etc. Therefore, they get a chance to broaden their minds about other countries in the world and acquire a lot of knowledge.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than such perks. Firstly, some hackers can steal people's personal information. For some social platforms that do not have high security such as Facebook, a lot of hackers can get into individuals' computer systems without permission to steal their information. After that, they will take advantage of this action by illegally selling those data to others. Secondly, there are a growing number of kidnappings and abductions through social applications. Because this type of platform is not only for normal people but also for frauds. They exploit this opportunity to make friends with individuals who are gullible so that they can make an appointment with these people and kidnap them. Then, they will sell ''their friends" to traffickers to make money or they will call the family members to extort.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of this phenomenon are far greater than the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 552, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ct place for youngsters to make friends who are foreigners since social networking webs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15615615616 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77464152144 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5299191637 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103182708899 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357436597932 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311113854296 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677801236748 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478046342671 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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