Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects? LONG - HOMEWORK - MAY 29
It is a common occurrance that a lot of workers are being composed to do their job with extra time. There are few reason for this tendency leading to some negative result on both employee’s side and employer’s side.
To begin with, the reason can directly come from the person who is paid. This occurrance occurs when workers get faluire in controling their time. And the precise result that the overtime which is an expectation. Another reason for this tendency which no ones can refuse that pressure of works today change linearly with development and innovation of the world. For more clearly, nowadays, lots of companies request the employees do work by projects or some ones have salary payment by counting ‘produce’ .which workers made. Therefore, in generally, this kind of menthod urges staff to work hardly for getting sufficent cost and it also mantains the competative edge between companies.
This tendency was and gobalizing to date. And the negative effects become more and more easily to relising. At first level, the impact is about job insprition. Due to working for long time, it is not only quite difficult for employees to get a great score but also there is no family time futher. However this bad reslut which is faced either staff or employers. It is incrseingly turnover rates and retraining workers that coporates will face in case progressively taking out staff’s heath.
In conlusion, that is very hard in criticizing who is right with their own justification. And human being just can reduce and prevent as much as we can concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
...do their job with extra time. There are few reason for this tendency leading to some negat...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ave salary payment by counting ‘produce’ .which workers made. Therefore, in genera...
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Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
...ly, this kind of menthod urges staff to work hardly for getting sufficent cost and it also ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not only quite difficult for employees to get a great score but also there is n...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ut also there is no family time futher. However this bad reslut which is faced either s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, in general, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98479087452 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67750271785 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5007416861 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0646205574643 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190889593324 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231893975551 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344255981585 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240406982809 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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