Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no linger the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?
In the 21st century, it is phenomenon the large number of public transportation are invented due to technology development. Therefore, cycling is not as popular as the previous time. As far as I know, below are a couple of reasons in my school of thought, followed by appropriate solutions to promote the wider users for bicycling.
The first fact to note that it is inconvenient to use bicycle in modernized life. Nowadays, people have a tendency for multitasking because they are getting busier than before.they want to spend as little time on stuff things as possible. bicycling are in these things that individuals prefer to eliminate. they would rather use other convenient vehicles such as subway and motorbikes.
Another factor that should be taken into account is the fact that there are enviroment factors effecting bike users. Indeed, cycling on street ca involve high risks of unpleasant weather condition or dusting. For instance, it is risky that candidate ride a bicycle to the interview in inclement weather, without dedicated facilities, they may be wet if it is rainy day.
Several actions can be taken to increase the popularity of bicycles. The main solution is build more lanes for cyclists. lanes would help people move more safe and faster, which is decrease the harmful effects for cyclists. thus, more people would choose bicycle as their primary means of transportation.
To sum up, talking into consideration of above-mentioned facts, there are some reasons that using bicycle are becoming less common in today. A solution to this problem require proactive actions from community. it is necessary to apply them into society because bicycling is healthful transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94138053725 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4109099944 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157300830886 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449206135344 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329385068983 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768152644838 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149118351924 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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