Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?
In the 21st century, it is a phenomenon that large number of public transportation are invented due to technology development. Therefore, cycling is not as popular as the previous. As far as I know, below are a couple of reasons in my school of thought, followed by appropriate solutions to promote the wider users for the community. The first fact to note that it is inconvenient to use the bicycle in modernized life. Nowadays, people have a tendency to multitasking because they are getting busier than before. they want to spend as little time on stuff things as possible. bicycling is in these things that individuals prefer to eliminate. they would rather use other convenient vehicles such as the subway and motorbikes. Another reason that should be taken into account is the fact that there are environmental factors affecting bike users. Indeed, cycling on street can involve high risks of unpleasant weather conditions or dusting. For instance, it is risky that candidates ride a bicycle to the interview in inclement weather, without dedicated facilities, they may be wet if it is a rainy day. Several actions can be taken to increase the popularity of bicycles. The main solution is to build more lanes for cyclists. lanes would help people move more safely and faster, which is decrease the harmful effects for cyclists. Thus, more people would choose the bicycle as their primary means of transportation. To sum up, taking into consideration of above-mentioned facts, there are some reasons that using bicycle is becoming less common today. A solution to this problem requires proactive actions from community. it is necessary to apply them to society because bicycling is healthful transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97272450677 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9030649869 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175482258516 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04623960761 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341344248908 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175482258516 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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