Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught in schools but other disagree and believe that it is only wastage of time.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A topical issue in modern society is culinary skill. it is often said that cooking is an indispensable part of human life which should be applied for school like a subject; however, others feel that it is unimportant. this essay will examine both sides of this argument and provide an overall opinion.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why some people think that cooking is wastage of time. Firstly, they did not learn how to cook when they were a child. To elaborate, several parents do not want their children have to cook miserably to serve dishes for them. Secondly, some people are quite busy with work. For example, they may purchase fast food in convenient stores for each meal, so they seldom cook and this skill will be broken in the future.
On the other hand, many people believe that cooking is a beneficial skill in modern life for a number of reasons. First of all, they can cook the food for themselves when they stay away with their family. For instance, most students who study overseas have to prepare and cook meals without any assistances. Furthermore, cooking is also a method to make money. To be specific, some people become unemployed after graduating, and they apply culinary skill for a job at the restaurants.
In conclusion, cooking skill is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I am of the opinion that people can cook and master in culinary skill who are extremely superior. If no one knows the methods to cook tasty meals, people will not be interested in groceries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71268656716 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45058935179 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1537893963 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256384928306 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853668388035 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683090952446 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162921788167 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032399119827 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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