It is unfortunate that nowadays vast majority of people are using other mode of transportation for traveling rather than cycle. This mode of transportion has tremendous impact on individuals and environment too. This essay will discuss the reason of this phenomenon and suggest some possible solutions to encourage masses to use a bicycle in the subsequent paragraphs.
Is it crucial to use cycle for traveling? Undoubtedly yes. In this fast pace life, people do not have a time to use bicycles for traveling as they have to reach on destination quickly. Despite the importance of cycling in life, people use motorcycles and cars for transportation because of less space for separate roads and lack of safety. Further and even more importantly, in some countries such as Delhi, Mumbai have least space on road where people can not use cycle because of risk involvment. Thus, it is not practically right to use this transportion in cities.
Government must encourage citizens to use cycle by constructing new roads for cycling. Besides this, they should spread awareness by advertising benefits of this eco-friendly way of transportation. By using bicycles people not only enhance their life expectancy, but also saves the environment. To epitome, in Amsterdam majority of the people are using bicycles as it is playing an indispensable role in maintaining the environment and also help to decrease carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Government should provides subsidy on bicycles and they must rise price of fossil fuels so that people use it minimum. Henceforth, it is mandatory to use cycle to protect environment and maintain physical fitness too.
To recapitulate, I reaffirm saying that people must use cycles for betterment of the environment and their health too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26408450704 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07707598988 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.373371449 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206191122978 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767463871465 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293653668996 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131876964487 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283041698825 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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