Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attidutes?
With globalized world, people have tendency to get away from the noisy of country to chill out at other nations, therefore, global tourism becomes more and more popular trend. Although a boost to tourism can bring a huge amount of revenue for destinations, residents argue that the growth of tourism affects negatively on their country. This essay will discuss some causes and measures to tackle this issue.
To begin with, there are a few reasons why habitants believe that tourism has some drawbacks for local region. First and foremost, an increase in traveling oversea results in the pollution of environment. For example, in the height of tourist season, famous beaches are always swarming with holiday makers, they sometimes litter garbage such as plastic bags. canned or other rubbish along the seashore. This not only deteriorate the atmosphere but also make the scenery of destinations worse. In addition, the diversity of foreign tourists influences adversely on local culture. Due to the fact that international tourists have some words or manners which are not suitable for cultural local, their behaviors will impact or even bother residents.
In order to deter these disadvantages of worldwide tourism on destinations and change the vision of local people about this problem, some solutions should be carried out. Firstly, authorities should enact some strict regulations on international tourists to protect natural environment. For instance, the governments can impose some punishments such as fines or other non-custodial sentences on tourists who break the law. These penalties will act as a deterrent to decrease the negative influences on local's environment. Moreover, the local councils ought to organize some programs to introduce local culture for travelers. This helps tourists can absorb the traditional of destinations and do not have inappropriate actions.
In conclusion, there are some disadvantages of international tourism on both local economy and culture which impact negatively on residents' attitude. this problem can be properly addressed by some tourism tourism laws and cultural - exchange activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: locals'; local's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56574923547 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90916928231 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.755951899 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189933258899 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555122886034 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600550741712 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120965927333 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166785454081 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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