Music is a form of art that transcends around the world. People, especially teenagers, listen to songs which influences them in a particular way. In my opinion, contemporary music has many positive impacts on youngsters while, there are also some negative effects that depends upon the genre of music that they listen to.
Music can help people to stay calm when under pressure or depression. It helps them concentrate on themselves for a moment and then towards work that needs to be finished. For instance, college and school students face depression and anxiety due to homework and exams. During this period, if they listen to a motivational song, it will boost their confidence and energize their will to perform their best without nervousness. Thus, music can be used in sessions to improve health and quality of life.
However, music can change the personality of a person. While listening to songs that involves discouraging views, it might cause danger to the listener. For example, nowadays, there are music which involves bad language that might tempt adolescents to also use them in daily life. Hence, it is important for adults to guide children about the type of music that they can listen to at a particular age.
In conclusion, music does have optimistic views that can improve view of life but there are also pessimistic views that can ruin a youngster’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01739130435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68484509697 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1521738754 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7692307692 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217004849887 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759713657965 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765771979952 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142094536409 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520978302444 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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