Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?
Due to the advent of technology, video games has been widely popular among children. Playing video games might have merits as well as demerits which will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, in case of advantages, video games can improve imagination and memory skills. The graphics provided in games inspires many children to create their own games, drawings and paintings which could benefit them in the future by participating in various competition to showcase their new talent. Secondly, they help to relieve stress that is experienced by school students due to homework and competitive exams. Students are forced to succeed in academic events as well as extra-curricular activities which can lead to stress, depression and other health issues when not satisfied with their performance. One research by Harvard University showed that by playing video games for about one hour during weekends, students showed improved mental health and academic scores.
However, there are drawbacks such as addiction that can effect children’s daily life. When games are played for more than two hour per day, students can’t control themselves and even tend to use study hours to play games that could seriously damage their future. Also, some graphics such as fight scenes, blood and weapons may influence kids to perform dangerous and illegal activities in real life. For example, online video game titled ‘gang beast’ is a multiplayer game that involves killing all member and the last player to be alive wins. Hence, it is important for parents to choose particular games appropriate for their ages.
In conclusion, video games may be fun to play but steps need to be taken by the government or game development companies to ensure that children don’t get access to games that are not designed for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62713821443 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4727444459 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363588558187 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128616374093 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914879772027 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257132987369 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597508606187 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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