Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this news?
Government spends more money on arts such as music, dance and paintings while, some people think that it is unnecessary to fund them. In my opinion, I partially agree that government should fund arts and that more focus should be spent on other areas of interest.
Firstly, a nation’s glory is shown with the help of heritage sites and tourist spots. If the government does not fund to preserve these sites then economy will lose its attraction towards foreigners that can affect globalization of the country. For instance, Valluvar kottam, a heritage site built for the poet Thiruvalluvar, after renovation attracted many tourists to learn about Indian culture. Thus, only with the help of money provided by the government, the heritage sites can be preserved and maintained properly.
However, people who are interested in art are in the minority and activities such as sports attract more attention. It is important for the higher officials to consider managing places that gather huge crowds because the majority are interested in visiting those particular locations. For example, in India most people consider watching cricket matches in stadiums. Government should offer funds to maintain as well as expand the seating capacity in arenas. Hence, the priority should be given to events that attract many people.
In conclusion, art should not be banished and it is in need of money to reconstruct old buildings but, since the least amount of people are interested in visiting places such as museums and art galleries, government should focus on offering funds to areas that attract more people and to people who need it such as the poor and unemployed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lp of heritage sites and tourist spots. If the government does not fund to preserv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16605166052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69169412252 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9711437956 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187005065601 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689742808672 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644431038441 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127307600102 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684359242424 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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